"From the moment Woods stepped onto the first tee..."
/Mike Dudurich filed this Pittsburgh Tribune Review story on Tiger's day at Oakmont:
From the moment Woods stepped onto the first tee and pulled the Sasquatch Sumo Squared driver from his bag and launched his Nike One ball approximately 330 yards to the middle of the fairway...Now I know it's not for me to offer writing suggestions, but I really think the future of journalism will be more informative for us consumers. Dudurich could have filed something like this:
From the moment Woods woke up in his NikeFitTherma jammies, slipped on his Seamless S/S Colorplay Mock, adorned his SP-8 TW Tour shoes in the hot new black and Del Monte white (available May 3rd), slipped on his Custom Crested Tech Xtreme Glove, Nike's brand focus stepped onto the first tee and pulled the Sasquatch Sumo Squared driver from his bag and launched his Nike One ball approximately 330 yards to the middle of the fairway...